Poem
A furry little rabit scampers accross the street
not knowing the horrible fate he will meet
a truck will smush his little head
run him over 'til he's dead
his sad little body lying on the road
this truck now carries a heavy load
the guilt of one poor rabit dying
and a little girl on the sidewalk crying
Okay I know its really horrible(not the writing) and sick and I have a twisted mind.. but other then that I think its good writing.
I LOVE BUNNIES DONT JUDGE ME AND MY WEIRD MIND!!!!!!
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5 comments:
i think this is a wonderful poem with lovely rhyming and good imagery. I agree with you that the subject is a bit sick. Im sorry. I love bunnies too.
A poem about running over rabbits? I'll give you originality, I guess.
Did your puppy die??\
Even though it was sick, it still had good rhyming. I know people who eat guinea pigs (sick), but i wonder who eats bunnies...;o
Aw! That is slightly depressing and makes you cringe at imagery. good writing!
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